Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
Shop deviantART for the
holidays and save BIG!
Click here! :holly:
[x]

deviantART

:love:
 

Too Much by ~BeautifulDreams:iconBeautifulDreams:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Old Poetry Structure > Emotional




How could you?
How could you leave me
With so many questions
I sit and wonder where things went wrong
Wishing i knew
I want  to put everything back together
Like a puzzle we did
Why couldn't we fix this?

How could you?
How could you leave me here alone
With noone to love
I sit here talking to the teddy bear you gave me
Wishing he were you
Giving him little kisses and holding him tight
Why won't he talk to me too?

How could you?
How could you leave me with such pain
With so many tears
I sit thinking of all the good things we had
Just crying
My tears roll down my face
Like raindrops on a rose petal
Why won't they stop?

How could you?
How could you unbreak my heart
With a trip back home
I sit and think of the bad things you put me through
Wishing it'd never happened
Finally we're back together
Like that puzzle we built
How could you let me love you this much
How could you?

2-8-04
©2004-2009 ~BeautifulDreams
:iconbeautifuldreams:

Author's Comments

yea i had to write this poem for english...

enjoy

Comments


love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconunlovedpoet:
~UnLoVeDpOeT Apr 16, 2004, 5:11:16 AM
:tears:

--
** I could look you in the eyes and pretend**
**I could look you in the eyes and say i'm fine**
**I could lie everyday and say everythings okay**
**But the truth remains the same**
**It never stops hurting**
:iconbeautifuldreams:
~BeautifulDreams Apr 16, 2004, 8:41:10 AM
:hug: Hope you liked it

--
Who I am now, Is who I will be forever.
:iconunlovedpoet:
~UnLoVeDpOeT Apr 17, 2004, 5:21:44 AM
:hug: back i LOVE it!!

--
** I could look you in the eyes and pretend**
**I could look you in the eyes and say i'm fine**
**I could lie everyday and say everythings okay**
**But the truth remains the same**
**It never stops hurting**
:iconhavok-15:
~HaVoK-15 May 2, 2004, 10:54:41 PM
i really like this. not only do you realize love is hell at the end....for the above reasons but i can see you crying..you used good descriptions. bravo, one of mah favorites.

--
the first star i see
may not be a star
cant do a thing but wait
so lets wait for one more

CAN YOU STILL FEEL THE BUTTERFLIES
---------------------------
JEW=jimmy eat world
:iconbeautifuldreams:
~BeautifulDreams May 2, 2004, 10:56:04 PM
Thankies a bunch!:) Actually i wrote this on mixed feelings, this is wat i dont want to happen.. Kinda hard to explain wat was goin on at the time.

--
Who I am now, Is who I will be forever.
:iconhavok-15:
~HaVoK-15 May 2, 2004, 10:58:50 PM
well try now im interested. cause its hard to realize what love does to you and how much you fucking hate it until its too late...when all you want, all you need is that single fucking person. and its sad and pathetic how we crumble for just soul. and biochemically love is no differant then eating large quantities of chocolate.

--
the first star i see
may not be a star
cant do a thing but wait
so lets wait for one more

CAN YOU STILL FEEL THE BUTTERFLIES
---------------------------
JEW=jimmy eat world
:iconbeautifuldreams:
~BeautifulDreams May 2, 2004, 11:01:50 PM
Eh, too hard to explain, plus i need sleep.. I have school in 2and half hours!!! :(

--
Who I am now, Is who I will be forever.
:iconhavok-15:
~HaVoK-15 May 2, 2004, 11:02:14 PM
ohh poor thing so do i

--
the first star i see
may not be a star
cant do a thing but wait
so lets wait for one more

CAN YOU STILL FEEL THE BUTTERFLIES
---------------------------
JEW=jimmy eat world
:iconbeautifuldreams:
~BeautifulDreams May 2, 2004, 11:03:07 PM
heh, do you have msn? i can explain it to you tomorrow

--
Who I am now, Is who I will be forever.
Previous Page12Next Page

Details

April 15, 2004
1.2 KB
8.0 KB
253×347

Statistics

12
1 [who?]
60 (0 today)
11 (0 today)

Share

Link
Thumb

Site Map

©2009 deviantART. All rights reserved
About Us | Contact Us | Site Tour | Help & FAQ Advertise | Services Etiquette | Privacy Policy | Terms of Service | Copyright Policy